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Describe the city you live.

Describe the city you live.
I’m living in Fort lee, New Jersey. It is the east coast of USA.
It is surrounded by river and there is bridge over the steam connecting New Jersey to New york.
It is called George Washington Bridge and It is named from the president in the USA who abolished slavery in 19 century.
This town is consist of houses but you can see many modern style building are under construction now.
There are big fire department and police, so I can feel safety.

Describe the city you lived.
I lived in yongin which is outskirt of Seoul.
My house type was apartment and It was right next to the highway pass.
So, I was able to go to Seoul within 30 min by bus.
Behind of apartment complex, there is mountain.
I don’t like to hike much but because it has a low grade I can hike easily.
There is complex finished in a year, so I expect that I was able to enjoy various activities like yoga or gym there.
If you take a buy for 10 minutes, you can reach the park with big river.
Along the river there is a path so that you can work out there.

Describe the city you live.
I’m living in Fort lee, New Jersey. It is the east coast of USA.
It is surrounded by river and there is bridge over the steam connecting New Jersey to New york.
It is called George Washington Bridge and It is named from the president in the USA who abolished slavery in 19 century.
This town is consist of houses but you can see many modern style building are under construction now.
There are big fire department and police, so I can feel safety.

Describe the city you lived.
I lived in yongin which is outskirt of Seoul.
My house type was apartment and It was right next to the highway pass.
So, I was able to go to Seoul within 30 min by bus.
Behind of apartment complex, there is mountain.
I don’t like to hike much but because it has a low grade I can hike easily.
There is complex finished in a year, so I expect that I was able to enjoy various activities like yoga or gym there.
If you take a buy for 10 minutes, you can reach the park with big river.
Along the river there is a path so that you can work out there.


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