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Hello, Ms. Sacha Drecksel.

I’m Jason from MET Korea.
It’s my pleasure to e-mailing you.

I know you were assigned sales person of the LG's Mil-std-810 projects.
So, I would like to make a request.


At present, the Samsung Display will test MIL-STD-810G on their products.
They want a MET engineer's witness test because of product security.

As you might know, there is no ESL engineer in the Korea office.
Therefore, it is necessary to receive training from US head office, but it is impossible due to internal circumstances of Korea office.

The Customers expressed strong willingness to take the Mil-std-810 test through MET.
In addition, if MET can possible to test the world's first flexible display of mobile phone, It will be a good reference for us.



The customer is Samsung Display marketing team.
Upon completion of the Mil-std-810 test, they will be promoting through the MET Logo on their product & homepage.
This will also help MET promotion.


Their requirements are as follows.

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I would like to request follow up on this job please.
I will give them contact information about You & Steve in today.

I'm sorry for this request, but they want to talk directly to the MET US headquarters.
Please refer to the attached files and following customer contact information.

CORRECTIONS:

To: Ms. Sacha Drecksel

Greetings!

I’m Jason from MET Korea.
It’s my pleasure to e-mail you.

I know you were assigned as a sales person of the LG's Mil-std-810 projects.
So, I would like to make a request.

Currently, the Samsung Display will test MIL-STD-810G on their products.
They want MET engineer's to witness the test because of the product security.

As you might know, there is no ESL engineer in Korean office.
Therefore, it is necessary to receive training from the US head office but it is impossible, due to internal circumstances of Korean office.

The Customers expressed strong willingness to take the Mil-std-810 test through MET.
In addition, if MET can possible test the world's first flexible display of mobile phone, It will be a good reference for us.

The customer is Samsung Display marketing team.
Upon completion of the Mil-std-810 test, they will be promoting through MET Logo on their product & homepage.
This will also help MET promotion.

Their requirements are as follows.

I would like to request for follow up on this job please.
I will give them your contact information together with the contact information of Steve today.

I'm sorry for this request, but they want to talk directly to the MET US headquarters.
Please refer to the attached files and following customer contact information.


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