It's art class again. This time I draw a cat and cut the cat and make it more. I was very happy. But it was made of paper, so it can brake easyily. So I carefully grab it and go home. I had science class, too. It was making dinosaur bone. It is easy to make a fossil. I put the clay in to the cast and I wait. And wait and wait. Finally the fossil is finish. The fossil's type is ammonite and a seabug. It was look like three leaf. It was nice. I want to make more dinosaur fossil.
It's art class again! This time, I drew a cat. I cut out the drawing to make several copies. I was really happy with it! But since it was made of paper, it could break easily. So, I carefully picked it up and took it home.
I also had science class today. We learned about making dinosaur bones, or rather, fossils! It turns out making a fossil is quite easy. I put some clay in the mold and waited patiently. Finally, the fossil was finished!
My fossil turned out to be an ammonite and a sea bug. It looked a bit like a three-leaf clover, which was pretty cool. I definitely want to make more dinosaur fossils!
Here's what I changed:
- "Draw a cat and cut the cat and make it more": Changed to "drew a cat" and "cut out the drawing to make several copies" for clarity.
- "Brake easyily": Changed to "break easily" for correct spelling.
- "Grab": Changed to "picked up" for a more appropriate term in this context.
- "Making dinosaur bone": Changed to "making dinosaur bones, or rather, fossils" for accuracy. Fossils are the remains of ancient life, not the bones themselves.
- "It is easy to make a fossil": Changed to "It turns out making a fossil is quite easy" for smoother flow.
- "Put in to the cast": Changed to "put some clay in the mold" for better clarity. Casts are usually for making replicas, while molds are used for shaping clay.
- "The fossil's type is ammonite and a sea bug. It was look like three leaf": Changed to "My fossil turned out to be an ammonite and a sea bug. It looked a bit like a three-leaf clover" for better sentence structure and spelling.
