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how to be happy.

The first i would like to say that happiness come from positive thinking.
and 2nd also happiness come from active behavior. for example, i love spending leisure time.
but it is not worth always. it is only worth when we doing active behavior.
and 3rd, be thank for everything. i know that way to be happiness, even it is too easy. but it it too difficult to do every single day.
and 4th, love family and friend. it is key point in our life to happiness.
last one is keep touching our happy memories. as we grow older, we lost our happiness feeling. so we have to keeping.

The first i would like to say that happiness come from positive thinking.
and 2nd also happiness come from active behavior. for example, i love spending leisure time.
but it is not worth always. it is only worth when we doing active behavior.
and 3rd, be thank for everything. i know that way to be happiness, even it is too easy. but it it too difficult to do every single day.
and 4th, love family and friend. it is key point in our life to happiness.
last one is keep touching our happy memories. as we grow older, we lost our happiness feeling. so we have to keeping.

Revised. :) 

I would like to say that happiness comes from positive thinking and comes from an active behavior. For example, I love spending my leisure time but It is not always worthy. It is only worthy when we are doing some activities that are vital to our happiness. Be thankful also for everything. I know It's impossible to be always happy but with our family and friends It's possible. Lets also don't forget our happy memories in the past to keep the happiness for a life time our memory. 


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