I worked at a cultural center last year, and I've been hoping to work at an art museum for a long time
So I quit my job two months ago, and Finally, I got a job as a curator at an art museum
I'm so happy, and I have to learn the work of the art museum hard from now on
While writing my resume, I was in trouble because I didn't have a English score
So, I want to get a score in advance in my spare time
I want to have fun practicing English
Then see you on Friday, Melissa :-)
Hello. I'm Yona
I worked at a cultural center last year, and I've been hoping to work at an art museum for a long time.
So, I quit my job two months ago, and finally, I got a job as a curator at an art museum.
I'm so happy, and I must learn the job at an art museum harder from now on.
While writing my resume, I was in trouble because I don’t have an English score.
So, I want to get a score in advance in my spare time.
I want to have fun practicing English
Then see you on Friday, Melissa :-)
NOTES:
1. 1. At the end of the sentences you should always use period [ . ]
2. 2. 'Work' can be used as a noun or a verb, while 'job' is always a noun. Therefore, you can also use “job” in the third paragraph.
3. 3. I was in trouble writing my resume for the reason that I don’t have an English proficiency test score. [ alternative sentence]
Hello Yona,
Thank you for sending some information about you, your effort is really appreciated.
Please consider some corrections given and let us have more conversation next class. See you on Friday.
