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Do you have any problems using a technology? How did you resolve it?

->Well, about a month ago, I bought my new TV shelves in the outlet. When I received TV shelves, I took out my TV from old shelves but I accidentally dropped it on the floor. When I checked it, I soon found out the screen was totally cracked and I could watched the TV. After a while I ended up going to the TV repair shop nearby and replaced with a brand-new screen.

Can you compare the park in the past to now?

->Well, as far as I remember a few things that have been changed. First, there were only a few places to seat and eat, so many people seat on the ground. Second, there was only 1 toilet in the park. Lastly, there was no parking space.
But now many things have changed. Many tables and chairs and five toilet are prepared. And enough parking space was built nearby park. Because of these improvement, each year, more and more people are going to the park

Do you have any problems using a technology? How did you resolve it?

->Well, about a month ago, I bought my new TV shelves in the outlet. When I received TV shelves, I took out my TV from the old shelves, but I accidentally dropped it on the floor. When I checked it, I soon found out the screen was totally cracked and I couldn’t watched on TV. After a while I ended up going to the TV repair shop nearby and replaced with a brand-new screen. 

Can you compare the park in the past to now?

->Well, as far as I remember a few things that have been changed. First, there were only a few places to seat  seats to sit and eat, so many people seat  sit on the ground. Second, there was only 1 toilet in the park. Lastly, there was no parking space.But now many things have changed. There are many tables and chairs, and five toilets are prepared and enough parking spaces were built nearby the park. Because of this improvement, each year, more and more people are going to the park

 


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