Let me tell you about my sister-in-law. She is selfish. She doesn't want to try understanding other people's thoughts or situations. She thinks that she's always right. She's rude and hot-tempered. And she trumps up charges on the slightest pretext. I can't stand anymore that's why we ended up fighting that I regret Because I became same person. I should'venkept my temper. I'll try to have a bigger heart and grow from it.
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I have a sister-in-law.
2024.02.27
Let me tell you about my sister-in-law. She is selfish. She doesn't try to understand other people's thoughts or situations. She thinks that she is always right. She's rude and hot-tempered. And she trumps up charges on the slightest pretext. I can't stand anymore. So we ended up finding. But I regret. Because I became same person. I should have kept my temper. I want to try to have a bigger heart bowl. I want to grow from it.
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