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How can we live without worry? I was told through the Bible I should not worry, but it seems almost impossible not to worry. Because I worry too much, I think this commandment is never to be obeyed. I know through Jesus Christ I can do all things and I believe Jesus hasn't given any commandments that we couldn't keep. So basically I have to repent the sin of worrying. Jesus knew we are worrying all the time. That is why He said we should cast our burden of worrying to God. So all we have to do is to give our worries to God and believe that He'll take care of them. If I totally believe that He will take care of my worries, I will feel comfortable and relaxed. So I try to keep my emotions steady. There is no reason I feel nervous and unstable. God is in control. It doesn't mean that I do nothing and become lazy about what I have to do. I should do what I can do, but as far as the things that I can't control, I should pray and not worry about what I pray for. My future is unclear but it is useless to worry about my future. I should do what I should do today with happy heart and expect the bright future which God will give to me.

How can we live without worry? I was told through the Bible I should not worry, but it seems almost impossible not to worry. Because I worry too much, I think this commandment is never to be obeyed. I know through Jesus Christ I can do all things and I believe Jesus hasn't given any commandments that we couldn't keep. So basically I have to repent the sin of worrying. Jesus knew we are worrying all the time. That is why He said we should cast our burden of worrying to God. So all we have to do is to give our worries to God and believe that He'll take care of them. If I totally believe that He will take care of my worries, I will feel comfortable and relaxed. So I try to keep my emotions steady. There is no reason I feel nervous and unstable. God is in control. It doesn't mean that I do nothing and become lazy about what I have to do. I should do what I can do, but as far as the things that I can't control, I should pray and not worry about what I pray for. My future is unclear but it is useless to worry about my future. I should do what I should do today with happy heart and expect the bright future which God will give to me.

How can we live without worryies? I was told through the Bible I should not worry, but it seems almost impossible not to worry. Because I worry too much, I think this commandment is never to be obeyed. I know through Jesus Christ I can do all things and I believe Jesus hasn't given any commandments that we couldn't keep. So basically I have to repent the sin of worrying. Jesus knew we are worrying all the time. That is why He said we should cast our burden of worrying to him, God. So all we have to do is to give our worries to God and believe that He'll take care of them. If I totally believe that He will take care of my worries, I will feel comfortable and relaxed. So I try to keep my emotions steady. There is no reason for me to I feel nervous and unstable. God is in control. It doesn't mean that I do nothing won’t do anything and become lazy about what I have to do. I should do what I can do, but as far as the things that I can't control, I should pray and not to worry about what I pray for. My future is unclear but it is useless to worry about my future. I should do what I should do today with a happy heart and expect the bright future which God will give to me.


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