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My dream to be a missionary in the future. I'm so blessed that I became a Christian at an early age. I hadn't realized before but God has always been leading my life. I have a beautiful wife and precious children. I am enjoying my life now. But my dream in my life hasn't changed. I know what is most important mission in my life. I am just thinking it hasn't come yet. Whenever I think about my dream to be a missionary in the future, something inside me somewhat blames me for not doing the mission right now. That's all true. If I think the mission is so important, why don't I just become a missionary right now. I can't exactly answer for that. Basically I can say that my chilren are still too young and we are not prepared yet. But all those reasons seem like lame excuses. How can I garantee that I will live until I serve God as a missionary in the future. Only God knows my future and if He wants, he can take my life anytime. I just started my job in my church as a cell leader. I want to do this job with all my heart. Although I am not a missionary right now, I will do this job like I am a missionary right now. I hope this will be a good practice for the future.

My dream to be a missionary in the future. I'm so blessed that I became a Christian at an early age. I hadn't realized before but God has always been leading my life. I have a beautiful wife and precious children. I am enjoying my life now. But my dream in my life hasn't changed. I know what is most important mission in my life. I am just thinking it hasn't come yet. Whenever I think about my dream to be a missionary in the future, something inside me somewhat blames me for not doing the mission right now. That's all true. If I think the mission is so important, why don't I just become a missionary right now. I can't exactly answer for that. Basically I can say that my chilren are still too young and we are not prepared yet. But all those reasons seem like lame excuses. How can I garantee that I will live until I serve God as a missionary in the future. Only God knows my future and if He wants, he can take my life anytime. I just started my job in my church as a cell leader. I want to do this job with all my heart. Although I am not a missionary right now, I will do this job like I am a missionary right now. I hope this will be a good practice for the future.

 

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My dream is to be a missionary in the future. I'm so blessed that I became a Christian at an early age. I hadn't realized it before, but God has always been leading my life. I have a beautiful wife and precious children. I am enjoying my life now. But, my dream in my life hasn't changed. I know what is most important mission in my life is. I am just thinking it hasn't come yet. Whenever, I think about my dream to be a missionary in the future, something inside me somewhat blames me for not doing the mission right now. That's all true. If I think the mission is so important, why don't I just become a missionary right now? I can't exactly answer for that. Basically, I can say that my children are still too young and we are not prepared yet. But all those reasons seem like lame excuses. How can I guarantee that I will live until I serve God as a missionary in the future? Only God knows my future and if he wants, he can take my life anytime. I just started my job in my church as a cell group leader. I want to do this job with all my heart. Although, I am not a missionary right now, I will do this job like I am a missionary right now. I hope this will be a good practice for the future.

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