Yesterday

Yesterday the school finish earlier.
so i went to study cafe in maya shoppingmall.
And went to onenimman too!!!!
Yesterday my mood is soooooo good.

Yesterday, the school finished early.
So I went to study at a cafe in Maya Shoppingmall.
And I went to Onenimman, too!!!!
Yesterday, my mood was soooooo good.

 

Note: Good day, Yennah. I corrected your composition. You did well on this one. However, you have to learn how and when to use a comma. You can observe in my correction how and when to use it. The blue ones are the words that I added, while the green ones are the ones I corrected.