GREAT DAY

Last Friday was open class for parents in son's school.
It was first time since my son became elementary student. Parents attended in the second class. Kids had a presentation our prepared theire writing. My son spoken a loudy with smile. I though he seems be shyguy but he didn't. He got along well with his friends And he is also positive.
I was so proud of him.

Last Friday was open class for parents in son's school.

[ Last Friday, my son's school held an open class for parents.]

It was first time since my son became elementary student. Parents attended in the second class. Kids had a presentation our prepared theire writing. My son spoken a loudy with smile.

[ It was the first time since my son entered elementary school. Parents attended the second class. Kids had a presentation. We helped them prepare for it. My son spoke aloud with a smile.]

I though he seems be shyguy but he didn't. He got along well with his friends And he is also positive.

[ I thought he's a shy boy, but he wasn't. He got along well with his friends. He is also a positive person.]

I was so proud of him.

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