Next morning, Solli woke up. She noticed that the shining has stoped. She thought it was really a dream. Then, she grab the jelly bean bottle and went outside. Solli's breakfast was jelly bean. She poured jelly beans to the bowl. She also poured milk to the glass. She ate one jelly bean. It was a popcorn flavor. It was quite salty and sweet. Time passed, and there was one jelly bean left and milk was cleared. Solli throwed the jelly bean to her mouth. It was french fry flavored! Solli was happy.
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2023.11.07
Next day morning, Solli woke up. She noticed that shining has stoped. She thought it was really a dream. Then, she grab the jelly bean bottle and went outside. Solli's breakfast was jelly bean. She poured jelly beans to the bowl. She also poured milk to the glass. She ate one jelly bean. It was popcorn flavor. It was quite salty and sweet. Time passed, and there was one jelly bean left and milk was cleared. Solli throwed the jelly bean to her mouth. It was french fry flavored! Solli was happy.
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