I went to Gunsan last Tuseday to Wednesday. Gunsan was a huge port city during Japanese Colonial Era, so there are many Japanese buildings in Gunsan. I saw many beautiful buildings, in Gunsan there is the oldest bakery, I visited it and bought some bread. After looking at the beautiful buildings, we ate bread for lunch. At dinner, I went to Korean Galabi restaurant, it was so delicious!. After one night we came back home. Trip to Gunsan was very wonderful!.
영작교정
완료
Travel to Gunsan
2023.11.02
I went to Gunsan thins Tuseday~Wednsday. Gunsan was a huge port city at Japanese colonial era. So there are many Japanese buildings in Gunsan. I saw many beautiful buildings. AIn Gunsan there is the oldest bakery. So I visited there and bought some breads after looking at the beautiful buildings. We ate breads for lunch. At dinner, I went to Korean Galabi restaurant. It was sooooooooooooooooooooooooo? delicious. After one night we came back home. Trip to Gunsan was very? wonderful!
튜터
Izzy
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
1559
접수
[25번째 영작 첨삭]
Essay3
-
2020.12.15
1558
접수
[24번째 영작 첨삭]
Essay
-
2020.12.15
1557
완료
[64번째 영작 첨삭]
my diary
-
2020.12.14
1556
완료
[9번째 영작 첨삭]
My weekend
-
2020.12.14
1555
완료
[63번째 영작 첨삭]
my diary
-
2020.12.13
1554
완료
[8번째 영작 첨삭]
My grandfather's birthday
-
2020.12.09
1553
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
DEAR FRIEND
-
2020.12.08
1552
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭]
My friend 2
-
2020.12.08
1551
완료
[3번째 영작 첨삭]
Dear my friend
-
2020.12.08
1550
완료
[7번째 영작 첨삭]
Dear Ruby
-
2020.12.08
1549
완료
[29번째 영작 첨삭]
Dear my friend
-
2020.12.08
1548
완료
[11번째 영작 첨삭]
Dear Multi-white
-
2020.12.08
1547
완료
[21번째 영작 첨삭]
Dear.my best friend Yewon
-
2020.12.08
1546
완료
[22번째 영작 첨삭]
My friend whom i want to see
-
2020.12.08
1545
완료
[28번째 영작 첨삭]
Book
-
2020.12.08
1544
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
DEAR FRIEND
-
2020.12.08
1543
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
DEAR MY FRIEND
-
2020.12.08
1542
완료
[14번째 영작 첨삭]
Dear chung ho
-
2020.12.08
1541
완료
[36번째 영작 첨삭]
To christina
-
2020.12.08
1540
완료
[23번째 영작 첨삭]
letter to a friend
-
2020.12.08