I went to Gunsan last Tuseday to Wednesday. Gunsan was a huge port city during Japanese Colonial Era, so there are many Japanese buildings in Gunsan. I saw many beautiful buildings, in Gunsan there is the oldest bakery, I visited it and bought some bread. After looking at the beautiful buildings, we ate bread for lunch. At dinner, I went to Korean Galabi restaurant, it was so delicious!. After one night we came back home. Trip to Gunsan was very wonderful!.
영작교정
완료
Travel to Gunsan
2023.11.02
I went to Gunsan thins Tuseday~Wednsday. Gunsan was a huge port city at Japanese colonial era. So there are many Japanese buildings in Gunsan. I saw many beautiful buildings. AIn Gunsan there is the oldest bakery. So I visited there and bought some breads after looking at the beautiful buildings. We ate breads for lunch. At dinner, I went to Korean Galabi restaurant. It was sooooooooooooooooooooooooo? delicious. After one night we came back home. Trip to Gunsan was very? wonderful!
튜터
Izzy
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
2859
접수
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Test
-
2022.05.27
2858
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
Apple mint
-
2022.05.27
2857
완료
[18번째 영작 첨삭]
dog euthanasia
Albie
2022.05.26
2856
완료
[13번째 영작 첨삭]
About the euthanasia of dogs
-
2022.05.26
2855
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Dog
-
2022.05.26
2854
완료
[21번째 영작 첨삭]
I felt slow of time flow.
Therese"☎
2022.05.26
2853
완료
[44번째 영작 첨삭]
Subject that I like.
Tine
2022.05.25
2852
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
Dougeball(2)
-
2022.05.25
2851
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Dougeball(1)
-
2022.05.25
2850
완료
[51번째 영작 첨삭]
Dog Euthanasia
Cashy
2022.05.25
2849
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
I like cats
-
2022.05.25
2848
완료
[14번째 영작 첨삭]
MY dad hate the dog
-
2022.05.25
2847
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Dogs
Tine
2022.05.25
2846
완료
[15번째 영작 첨삭]
Animal
-
2022.05.25
2845
완료
[35번째 영작 첨삭]
Cats
-
2022.05.25
2844
완료
[8번째 영작 첨삭]
Dog
-
2022.05.25
2843
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Cat
Disney
2022.05.25
2842
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
cat
-
2022.05.25
2841
완료
[20번째 영작 첨삭]
Busy days
Therese"☎
2022.05.25
2840
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
My favorite season
-
2022.05.25