I went to Gunsan last Tuseday to Wednesday. Gunsan was a huge port city during Japanese Colonial Era, so there are many Japanese buildings in Gunsan. I saw many beautiful buildings, in Gunsan there is the oldest bakery, I visited it and bought some bread. After looking at the beautiful buildings, we ate bread for lunch. At dinner, I went to Korean Galabi restaurant, it was so delicious!. After one night we came back home. Trip to Gunsan was very wonderful!.
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2023.11.02
I went to Gunsan thins Tuseday~Wednsday. Gunsan was a huge port city at Japanese colonial era. So there are many Japanese buildings in Gunsan. I saw many beautiful buildings. AIn Gunsan there is the oldest bakery. So I visited there and bought some breads after looking at the beautiful buildings. We ate breads for lunch. At dinner, I went to Korean Galabi restaurant. It was sooooooooooooooooooooooooo? delicious. After one night we came back home. Trip to Gunsan was very? wonderful!
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