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MY Son's school held on field day with parents. It was first time after my son into school. Dut to covid19 pandemic, all of palying in the school was stopped.
We were excited. When our kids individually running race in 100m we looked them. My son couldn't run fast .But It was ok. He is better than before. All Parents participated divided team and throw the ball -put in the high up box. Winner was put the ball in the box more in the time. I got emotional that My boy grew up faster.

MY Son's school held on field day with parents.

[ My son's school held a Field Day with parents.]

It was first time after my son into school. Dut to covid19 pandemic, all of palying in the school was stopped.

[ It was my first time to go there. Due to COVID-19 pandemic, all kinds of play at school were stopped.]

We were excited. [ CORRECT SENTENCE]

When our kids individually running race in 100m we looked them.

[ We looked at them (or watched them) when our kids had the 100m-race individually.]

My son couldn't run fast .But It was ok. He is better than before. [ CORRECT SENTENCE ]

All Parents participated divided team and throw the ball -put in the high up box. Winner was put the ball in the box more in the time. 

[The parents participated as well. We were divided into teams. We had to throw a ball. We had to make sure that the ball would go into a high box. The person who had the most number of balls in the box was the winner.]

I got emotional that my boy grew up faster.

[ I got emotional. My boy has grown faster. ]


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