I have a friend named Henry from Taiwan. I met him at the U.S. in 2018. I went to summer camp sand I met him. I always played with him so we became best friend. He invited me to his birthday party so I went there. 5 years later he visited Korea Seoul at 2023 June. And he visited Korea seoul again{because,in Taiwan they have a feild day every October with people live in Taiwan and they will do feild day in his school this year so he got a vacation fo a week. (Octover 20th)}.
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I have a friend named Henry from Taiwan. I met him at the U.S. in 2018. I went to summer camp sand I met him. I always played with him so we became best friend. He invited me to his birthday party so I went there. 5 years later he visited Korea Seoul at 2023 June. And he visited Korea seoul again{because,in Taiwan they have a feild day every October with people live in Taiwan and they will do feild day in his school this year so he got a vacation fo a week. (Octover 20th)}.
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