I have a friend named Henry from Taiwan. I met him at the U.S. in 2018. I went to summer camp sand I met him. I always played with him so we became best friend. He invited me to his birthday party so I went there. 5 years later he visited Korea Seoul at 2023 June. And he visited Korea seoul again{because,in Taiwan they have a feild day every October with people live in Taiwan and they will do feild day in his school this year so he got a vacation fo a week. (Octover 20th)}.
영작교정
완료
Taiwan friend
2023.10.23
I have a friend named Henry from Taiwan. I met him at the U.S. in 2018. I went to summer camp sand I met him. I always played with him so we became best friend. He invited me to his birthday party so I went there. 5 years later he visited Korea Seoul at 2023 June. And he visited Korea seoul again{because,in Taiwan they have a feild day every October with people live in Taiwan and they will do feild day in his school this year so he got a vacation fo a week. (Octover 20th)}.
튜터
Nang
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
5416
완료
[143번째 영작 첨삭]
Clolors
Harlene
2023.11.29
5415
접수
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
English Video Class
-
2023.11.29
5414
접수
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
self introduction
-
2023.11.29
5413
완료
[28번째 영작 첨삭]
Yesterday
Kimmy
2023.11.29
5412
완료
[27번째 영작 첨삭]
Yesterday
Kimmy
2023.11.29
5411
접수
[7번째 영작 첨삭]
A small debate
-
2023.11.29
5410
접수
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
My Favorite Writer
-
2023.11.29
5409
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭]
Miss Small Is Off The Wall!
Yugeen
2023.11.28
5408
접수
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
Good Argument
-
2023.11.28
5407
접수
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
Good Argument
-
2023.11.28
5406
접수
[4번째 영작 첨삭]
Good Argument
-
2023.11.28
5405
접수
[3번째 영작 첨삭]
Good Argument
-
2023.11.28
5404
접수
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
Good Argument
-
2023.11.28
5403
완료
[142번째 영작 첨삭]
Birth day party
Aya
2023.11.27
5402
접수
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
First class
-
2023.11.27
5401
완료
[71번째 영작 첨삭]
English
Jenica
2023.11.27
5400
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭]
a friend birthday present
Anabelle
2023.11.27
5399
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭]
a friend birthday present
Anabelle
2023.11.27
5398
완료
[8번째 영작 첨삭]
Today`s my life
Garlie
2023.11.27
5397
접수
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
Hello Joyce teacher^^
-
2023.11.27