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I traveled to Busan with my family on this week
Busan is the second biggest city in Korea and it has beautiful sea.
I stayed at LCT hotel which is recently built by lotte . The hotel has great ocean view and facilities And also there is water park in Hotel.
It was not crowded because I visited on week days so I could ride the water slide without waiting . After swimming I went to Spa to warm up my body it was so relaxed.
I had so much fun with my family in Busan

I traveled to Busan with my family on this week.

[ I traveled to Busan with my family this week. ]

Busan is the second biggest city in Korea and it has beautiful sea.

[ Busan is the second biggest city in Korea. It has a beautiful sea. ]

I stayed at LCT hotel which is recently built by lotte . The hotel has great ocean view and facilities And also there is water park in Hotel.

[ I stayed at LCT Hotel which is recently built by Lotte. The hotel has a great view of the ocean. It has modern facilities as well. In addition, there is a water park at the hotel.]

It was not crowded because I visited on week days so I could ride the water slide without waiting . After swimming I went to Spa to warm up my body it was so relaxed.

[ It was not crowded because I visited on weekdays, so I could ride the water slide without waiting. After swimming, I went to a spa to warm up my body. It was so relaxing.]

I had so much fun with my family in Busan [ CORRECT SENTENCE ]


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