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Q) Have you use sorting feature on search result screen?
S : (S answered that the price and location are important from search result to determine what property you choose.) For the present, not yet. I probably would sort by price.

Q) After you click your favorite property from the search results list, What information do you check from property detail view?
S : I search for price, location and amenities most likely.
K : I check all information.

Q) How do you check the exact location of the property?
S : It depends on the app. If the app has it, then I check it in the app. I search the website if it doesn’t have a feature that shows the location of the place I wish to rent. PropertyGuru shows location, so it’s fine.

Q) When you see the property detail view in PropertyGuru app, Can you check the information about amenities well? What amenities do you think important?
H : I didn’t try to check it in PropertyGuru. I’d likely check the amenities in google map. If it is provided at the google maps level, I’ll check it in the app.
S : I didn’t. Lift, most important to me. And I prefer to close to train station, most. And properly walking distance. Personally I’d like place to exercise nearby like gym and swimming pool. If the property apps provide more information like location and amenities to me, It would be helpful. If the user experience is mostly line it’s easier. So if all the features are front loaded, meaning like If I search property that shows me all the things I want to for, I’m looking for, I’ll definitely approve that app.

Q) Have you used sorting feature on search result screen? 
S : (S answered that the price and location are important from search result to determine what property you choose. ) These days, not yet. I probably would sort by price.

Q) After you click your favorite property from the search results list, what information do you check from property detail view? 
S : I search for price, location and amenities most likely.
K : I check all information. 

Q) How do you check the exact location of the property? 
S : It depends on the app. If the app has it, then I check it in the app. I search the website if it doesn’t have a feature that shows the location of the place I wish to rent. PropertyGuru shows location, so it’s fine.

Q) When you see the property detail view in PropertyGuru app, Can you check the information about amenities well? What amenities do you think are important?
H : I didn’t try to check it in PropertyGuru. I’d likely check the amenities in Google map. If it is provided at the Google maps level, I’ll check it in the app.
S : I didn’t. Lift, most important to me. And I prefer a place close to train station most and a walking distance. Personally I’d like a place to exercise nearby like gym and swimming pool. If the property apps provide more information like location and amenities to me, it would be helpful. If the user experience is mostly line it’s easier. So if all the features are front loaded, meaning like If I search property that shows me all the things I want for, I’m looking for, I’ll definitely approve that app.


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