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This issue was written for my UX Design course that I was learning.
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STEP 2
1. When you give gifts, why did you give that gift? Why did you choose that gift? I cater their like. For example, my brother likes international things. I love get a gift for my brother around the world.
2. Do you usually ask them what they want to receive before you give a gift? Not directly, I tried to understand what this person likes. I need to undestand which culture that person is from because gift giving culture is different many other countries well.
3. Did you have any problem choosing a gift? It’s not so hard for me. Because I try to understand that person likes and then choose a gift.
4. Do you search where you buy a gift after you choose the kind of gift? If it’s a specific gift like Japanese costume, I search it on google or amazon.
5. Have you been worried about money when you buy a gift? No, I buy a gift on a budget.
6. How do you feel after you give a gift to someone? I feel happy when they like the gift.

STEP 3
Add notes here about things they are trying to do (use verbs): (3 min)
- #1 search international gift
- #2 enjoy their happiness face when the receiver gets gift

Add insights here on new things about your partner’s feelings/worldview to leverage in your design:
- SAY #1: “I like to give some international gifts to my friends and family who lives overseas.”
- SAY #2: “When I give gifts, I don’t ask any gift returned for me. I delight on their happiness face.”

This issue was written for my UX Design course that I am learning.
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STEP 2
1. When you give gifts, why did you give that gift? Why did you choose that gift? I cater their likes. For example, my brother likes international things. I love to give gifts to my brother from around the world.
2. Do you usually ask them what they want to receive before you give a gift? Not directly. I try to understand what this person likes. I need to undestand which culture that person is from because gift giving culture is different like in many other countries.
3. Did you have any problem choosing a gift? It’s not so hard for me because I try to understand that person's likes and then choose a gift.
4. Do you search where you buy a gift after you choose the kind of gift? If it’s a specific gift like Japanese costume, I search it on google or amazon.
5. Have you been worried about money when you buy a gift? No, I buy a gift on a budget.
6. How do you feel after you give a gift to someone? I feel happy when they like the gift.

STEP 3
Add notes here about things they are trying to do (use verbs): (3 min)
- #1 search international gift
- #2 enjoy the happiness on their faces when they receive the gifts.

Add insights here on new things about your partner’s feelings/worldview to leverage in your design:
- SAY #1: “I like to give some international gifts to my friends and family who live overseas.”
- SAY #2: “When I give gifts, I don’t ask any gift in return. I delight on the happiness on their faces.”


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