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Today i went to school, and i played soccer. it was super fun! and we did experiment about crystallization and we didn't finished yet, but it was nice and fun, and after school i went to EEC which is my Spanish class it was great, because i got new recur for competition , so it was super good. when i arrive to my house i ate fish for diner it was great. after i ate diner i study a lot. after i finish study i play with my new LEGO which is my birthday present its really huge. I love today!.

Today i went to school, and i played soccer. it was super fun! and we did experiment about crystallization and we didn't finished yet, but it was nice and fun, and after school i went to EEC which is my Spanish class it was great, because i got new recur for competition , so it was super good. when i arrive to my house i ate fish for diner it was great. after i ate diner i study a lot. after i finish study i play with my new LEGO which is my birthday present its really huge. I love today!.

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Today, I went to school and played soccer. It was super fun! We also conducted an experiment on crystallization, although we didn't finish it yet. Nevertheless, it was enjoyable. After school, I attended EEC, which is my Spanish class, and it was great because I got new gear for an upcoming competition. So, it was super good. When I arrived home, I had fish for dinner, and it was delicious. After dinner, I studied a lot. Once I finished studying, I played with my new LEGO set, which was my birthday present. It's really huge! I loved today! 

 

 


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