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Japan three years ago.

I traveled to Japan three years ago.
There was a culture there that was similar to Korea but also different.
It was difficult to drive because the steering wheel was facing away from us.
We visited many tourist attractions and had a very enjoyable and happy trip.
difficulties in communication, I was unable to make a restaurant reservation and the waiting time was long, but I thought that this also became a memorable part of the trip.
The aquarium overlooking the ocean was also impressive.

I traveled to Japan three years ago.
There was a culture there that was similar to Korea but also different.
It was difficult to drive because the steering wheel was facing away from us.
We visited many tourist attractions and had a very enjoyable and happy trip.
difficulties in communication, I was unable to make a restaurant reservation and the waiting time was long, but I thought that this also became a memorable part of the trip.
The aquarium overlooking the ocean was also impressive.

 

I traveled to Japan three years ago.

-I traveled to Japan three years ago.

There was a culture there that was similar to Korea but also different.

-There is a culture there that is almost the same as the culture in Korea.

It was difficult to drive because the steering wheel was facing away from us.

-It's hard to drive because we have our backs to the steering wheel.

We visited many tourist attractions and had a very enjoyable and happy trip.

-We went to many tourist spots and enjoyed ourselves a lot. We had a great trip.

difficulties in communication, I was unable to make a restaurant reservation and the waiting time was long, but I thought that this also became a memorable part of the trip.

-We had difficulties in communicating. I didn't made a reservation at the restaurant, so we waited for a long time. But we will never forget that because it was part of our trip.

The aquarium overlooking the ocean was also impressive.

-The aquarium we visited was also amazing. You can see the ocean there.

 

 

 


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