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English Practice 12

1.Residents completely need to understand the anesthetic study because they will consider it soon when they implement surgery.
2.Many ladies desire to have big boobs so that they think augmentation of boobs is more attractive.
3.You better input as many certificates as you have in your CV to get you more opportunities to have a job interviews.
4.Love sick is not curable until people make a new girlfriend or boyfriend.
5.Please take your pants half way down for injection and call one of nurses.
1.Patients who need a big surgery is given anesthesia from doctors.
2.The complication of the new evidence we have found muddled detectives.
3.Getting a tooth implant treatment is quite expensive in NZ.
4.The suspicious doctors injected me a few medicine, after then, I don’t remember anything.
5.What is the specific procedure to make a reservation ASAP?
2.In my country, some of people have a blind faith in divination.
3.That incident of my childhood scar me for like and haunt me for a long time, but I will get over it.
5.I suggest you to hire an intermediary so this case is simply solved and not going any farher and complicate legal action.
6.If you can invoke genie, What would you ask for 3 wishes.
7.I am very quick temper, So I am trying to meditate for at least 10 minutes every morning to be cool and calm in a crisis.

1.Residents completely need to understand the anesthetic study because they will consider it soon when they implement surgery.
2.Many ladies desire to have a big boobs so that they think augmentation of boobs is more attractive.
3.You better input as many certificates as you have in your CV to get you more opportunities to have a job interviews.
4.Love sick is not curable until people make a new girlfriend or boyfriend.
5.Please take your pants half way down for injection and call one of nurses.
1. Patients who needs a big major surgery is given an anesthesia from doctors.
2.The complication of the new evidence we have found muddled detectives.
3.Getting a tooth implant treatment is quite expensive in NZ.
4.The suspicious doctors injected me a few medicine, after then, I don’t remember anything.
5.What is the specific procedure to make a reservation ASAP?
2.In my country, some of people have a blind faith in divination.
3.That incident of my childhood, scar me for like and haunt me for a long time, but I will get over it.
5.I suggest you to hire an intermediary so that this case is will simply be solved and not going any further and won't complicate legal action.
6.If you can invoke to a  genie, What would you ask for 3 wishes.
7.I am very quick temper, a hot-tempered person so I am trying to meditate for at least 10 minutes every morning to be cool and calm in crisis.

I apreciated your efforts in practicing writing. Do your best always and don't be tired in learn. Fighting Gina! :) 


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