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1.I don’t want all this aggravation at work.
7.As long as the prognosis is favorable for me, I would be persistent to do that.
8.The illness is usually terminal.
9.Do not try to jab a vein.
10. He suffered from a bullet wound during the Vietnam war.
1.The bad habit that he bite his nails aggravated his throat
2.Preventing disease, keep clean your hands, don’t eat food that has been dropped
3.The forensics that belong to the government works for fair society
4.Even though his lung cancer was terminal step, his family hadn’t been giving up him
5.Here official statement gave wounds to all refugees trying to immigrate
4. The doctor strongly advised me against having greasy and high- calorie food and warned me you could have 50% higher chances to get a complication with that kind of food.
5. The old lady has diagnosed with lung cancer but fortunately she has founded in the early stage that can cure without surgery.
7.He suggested to have an injection directly into a vein for faster relief of symptoms.
9.To get a workvisa in New Zealand, you have to go through several long and complicated procedure.
10.I am having an operation to implant new tissue for covering my scar on my leg.

1.I don’t want all this aggravation at work.
7.As long as the prognosis is favorable for me, I would be persistent to do that.
8.The illness is usually terminal.
9.Do not try to jab a vein.
10. He suffered from a bullet wound gunshot during the Vietnam war.
1.The bad habit that he bites his nails aggravated his throat(.)
2.In preventing such diseases we should clean our hands and we shouldn't eat food that has been dropped.

3.The forensics that belong to the government works for fair for the society(.)4.Even though his lung cancer was in the terminal stepstage, his family hadn’t been giving up for him(.)
5.Here official statement gave wounds to all refugees trying to immigrate(.)
4. The doctor strongly advised me against having greasy and high- calorie food and warned me you could have 50% higher chances to get a complication with that kind of food.
5. The old lady has was diagnosed with lung cancer but fortunately she has founded it was in the early stage that can cure without surgery.
7.He suggested to have an injection directly into a his vein for faster relief of symptoms.
9.To get a workvisa in New Zealand, you have to go through several long and complicated procedure.
10.I am having an operation to implant new tissue for covering my scar on my leg.


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