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English practice(8)

1.I hope animists do not push me to believe their creed.
2.Even if you are ecclesiastical, you also need to respect people who are atheistic.
3.Abusing power is not appropriate even if you are worshiped as a deity by people.
4.We have such a phrase : exaltation makes whales dance, which means that exalting is a kind of important points for people to try something new.
5.Some animals like pigs are inclined to be a sacrifice for farmers who want to get their cultivation fertilized.
4.The failure doesn't damage your chances in future, but the way you think it would could be fatally flawed.
5.Forensics have tried to find traces of evidence but their were any remains.
7.Luckily, He has got diagnosed with his disease in the early stage, so his prognosis is excellent.
8.He is diagnosed with terminal cancer and sent to cancer ward at the hospital for treatment.
0.The second-war fatally wounded him both physical and mentally.
1.The 63 building in Korea was the highest building but now is the second highest and old as well as being decrepit.
2.One of the most thankful situations is to be able to say that many diseases like cancer can be cured by modern medical systems.
3.I realized that I was being stalked by a stranger and it persisted until I got home.
4.To kill a person fast, you need to stab veins.
5.However, it may be safe if the person who got stabbed treats shortly.

1.I hope animists do not push me to believe their creed.
2.Even if you are ecclesiastical, you also need to respect people who are atheistic.
3.Abusing of power is not appropriate even if you are worshiped as a deity by people.
4.We have such a phrase : exaltation makes whales dance, which means that exalting is a kind of important points for people to try something new.
5.Some animals like pigs are inclined to be a sacrifice for farmers who want to get their cultivation fertilized.
4.The Failure doesn't damage your chances in the future, but the way you think it would could be fatally flawed.
5.Forensics have tried to find traces of evidence but their were any remains.
7.Luckily, He has got was diagnosed with his a disease in the early stage, so his prognosis is excellent.
8.He is diagnosed with terminal cancer and sent to a cancer ward at the hospital for treatment.
0.The second-war fatally wounded him both physical and mentally.
1.The 63 in tall building in Korea was the highest building but now it's only the second highest and old as well as being decrepit.
2.One of the most thankful situations is to be able to say that many diseases like cancer can be cured by modern medical systems.
3.I realized that I was being stalked by a stranger and it persisted until I got home.
4.To kill a person fast, you need to stab the  jugular veins or the carotid arteries in the neck because it's the quilest ways to dispatch someone. 
5.However, It may be safe if the person who got stabbed treats shortly.


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