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English practice(8)

1.I hope animists do not push me to believe their creed.
2.Even if you are ecclesiastical, you also need to respect people who are atheistic.
3.Abusing power is not appropriate even if you are worshiped as a deity by people.
4.We have such a phrase : exaltation makes whales dance, which means that exalting is a kind of important points for people to try something new.
5.Some animals like pigs are inclined to be a sacrifice for farmers who want to get their cultivation fertilized.
4.The failure doesn't damage your chances in future, but the way you think it would could be fatally flawed.
5.Forensics have tried to find traces of evidence but their were any remains.
7.Luckily, He has got diagnosed with his disease in the early stage, so his prognosis is excellent.
8.He is diagnosed with terminal cancer and sent to cancer ward at the hospital for treatment.
0.The second-war fatally wounded him both physical and mentally.
1.The 63 building in Korea was the highest building but now is the second highest and old as well as being decrepit.
2.One of the most thankful situations is to be able to say that many diseases like cancer can be cured by modern medical systems.
3.I realized that I was being stalked by a stranger and it persisted until I got home.
4.To kill a person fast, you need to stab veins.
5.However, it may be safe if the person who got stabbed treats shortly.

1.I hope animists do not push me to believe their creed.
2.Even if you are ecclesiastical, you also need to respect people who are atheistic.
3.Abusing of power is not appropriate even if you are worshiped as a deity by people.
4.We have such a phrase : exaltation makes whales dance, which means that exalting is a kind of important points for people to try something new.
5.Some animals like pigs are inclined to be a sacrifice for farmers who want to get their cultivation fertilized.
4.The Failure doesn't damage your chances in the future, but the way you think it would could be fatally flawed.
5.Forensics have tried to find traces of evidence but their were any remains.
7.Luckily, He has got was diagnosed with his a disease in the early stage, so his prognosis is excellent.
8.He is diagnosed with terminal cancer and sent to a cancer ward at the hospital for treatment.
0.The second-war fatally wounded him both physical and mentally.
1.The 63 in tall building in Korea was the highest building but now it's only the second highest and old as well as being decrepit.
2.One of the most thankful situations is to be able to say that many diseases like cancer can be cured by modern medical systems.
3.I realized that I was being stalked by a stranger and it persisted until I got home.
4.To kill a person fast, you need to stab the  jugular veins or the carotid arteries in the neck because it's the quilest ways to dispatch someone. 
5.However, It may be safe if the person who got stabbed treats shortly.


수강정보
필리핀 화상영어 주 5회 30분 12주
교재
Open to Debate 1
[시니어] 프리토킹
번호
제목
작성자
튜터
작성일
3639
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EUNMI PARK
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3638
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[13번째 영작 첨삭] Every thing about me.
EUNMI PARK
Maribel
2022.11.06
3637
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[22번째 영작 첨삭] mara soup
Lim Iwoo
-
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3636
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[18번째 영작 첨삭] Made a muffler
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-
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[14번째 영작 첨삭] Serious Inviorment Pollution
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Jana
2022.11.04
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[2번째 영작 첨삭] chicken
caleb
Trish
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Park Sang Hyun (Stella)
-
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3632
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[32번째 영작 첨삭] Friday
Ellie
-
2022.11.04
3631
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[1번째 영작 첨삭] about last class
Park Sang Hyun (Stella)
-
2022.11.04
3630
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[13번째 영작 첨삭] 11.3 Thursday
Rose
Therese"☎
2022.11.04
3629
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[12번째 영작 첨삭] 11.3 Thursday
Rose Primrose
Therese"☎
2022.11.04
3628
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[1번째 영작 첨삭] It is difficult to learn swim
Claire
Cha
2022.11.03
3627
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭] badminton battle
caleb
Trish
2022.11.03
3626
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭] correction guide from
Joshep park
Charm
2022.11.02
3625
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[63번째 영작 첨삭] Warriors in to the wild.
Aiden
-
2022.11.02
3624
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[31번째 영작 첨삭] Yesterday
Ellie
-
2022.11.02
3623
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[2번째 영작 첨삭] dairy
kim ha jun
-
2022.11.01
3622
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[18번째 영작 첨삭] Halloween
Aiden
-
2022.10.29
3621
완료
[17번째 영작 첨삭] Happy Halloween!
Chloe
Ian"
2022.10.29
3620
완료
[62번째 영작 첨삭] Warriors
Aiden
Ian"
2022.10.28

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