Today, I am prepared to write my English note. But, I can't think how can I write in English notation? 'So, I think today my English note's theme is "If I go to~~~" any way If I can choice the country, I want to go Germany. Because, there are many heritages like Berlin wall and Brandenburg Gate. And, Germany has a long history of Prussia empire. And my dad is working German company. So, I like Germany and I want to go to Germany later!
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If I go to ~~~~~
2023.07.31
Today,I'm ready to write my English note.but,I can't think 'how can I write to English note?'so,I think today my English note's theme is "If I go to~~~"any way If I can choice the country,I want to go Germany.because,there are many heritage like Berlin wall and Brandenburg Gate.and,Germany has long history from Prussia empire.and my dad is working German company.so,I like Germany and I want to go Germany later!
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