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1.Ferrari has usually 8 engines to combust to get the highest speed as fast as it can.
2.Engineers have to become an expert of electrical devices to assemble and disassemble every component of them.
3.I did not expect a doctor to have a roll like a conveyor to tell bad news to my patients.
4.Once nuclear bombs launch, the country to be attacked should get rid of them before they land.
5.Loading a magazine, spinning the cylinder, pulling the trigger and shooting randomly are called “Russian roulette”.
1.The combustion of plastic bag make contaminant that make air bad.
2.It is a critical component when you make your own program.
3.Can you convey my apologies that I made mistakes to boss?
4.Kimchi smell permeate all food in refrigerator.
5.The detectives have found the source of violence that some students had done.
1.Not only white tigers are genetic anomaly, ligers are also from a genetic anomaly.
2.People attacked by an armed robber are now conscious.
3.There should be much more gap if I stagnate my study between me and my friend.
4.Sometimes intervention of a mediator between two parties to sort a problem out is not necessary.
5.My aggregation rate of muscle has been in recession since I stopped working out.
1. The acquisition I bought in the stock market lately has been decreasing in value.
2. Stop degrading other different racial people.
3. The gap of around two years in university affect me in studying.
4. Judiciary thought it is indisputable incident, So the criminal was sentenced to life.
5. I knew it will rain intuitively when I saw the sky.

1.Ferrari has usually 8 engines to combust to get the highest speed as fast as it can.
2.Engineers have to become an expert of electrical devices to assemble and disassemble every component they have. of them.
3.I did not expect a doctor to have a roll role like a conveyor to tell bad news to my patients.
4.Once nuclear bombs are launch, the people in the country to be attacked should get rid of themselves before they the bombs will land.
5.Loading a magazine, spinning the cylinder, pulling the trigger and shooting randomly are called “Russian roulette”.
1.The combustion of plastic bag make is a contaminant that makes air bad. bad air.
2.It is a critical component when you make your own program.
3.Can you convey my apologies that I made mistakes to the boss?
4.Kimchi smell permeate all food in the refrigerator.
5.The detectives have found the source of violence that some students had done.
1.Not only white tigers are genetic anomaly, ligers are also from a genetic anomaly.
2.People attacked by an armed robber are now conscious.
3.There should be much more gap if I stagnate my study between me and my friend.
4.Sometimes intervention of a mediator between two parties to sort a problem out is not necessary.
5.My aggregation rate of muscle has been in recession since I stopped working out.
1. The acquisition I bought in the stock market lately has been decreasing in value.
2. Stop degrading other different racial people.
3. The gap of around two years in the university affect me in studying.
4. Judiciary thought it is indisputable incident, so the criminal was sentenced to life inprisonment.
5. I knew it will rain intuitively when I saw the sky.

I'm happy Gina that you are also practicing writing not only speaking because as you know you're good in English already so just continue what you are doing to be a better and excellent English speaker someone. :) Fighting! 


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