Hello Mr. errol ! Good evening.
I'm a Kang Won university student from korea who will be an exchange student at UiTM soon.
I'm really appreciate that you've greeted me.
For no other reason, I am writing to enquire about something that I wondering.
Here are the questions.
1. we have two options of flight we ride.
The first one is on the 5th September and the other one is on the 7th, September.
Both will be arrive at 3:05 at Kuala Lumpur airport.
I would be most grateful if you could recommend which will be better.
2. When could we get the list of courses.
I suppose it will be given on the orientation day , but if it's not, please let me know when it to be.
3. Last question is that when could we know a dormitory we will stay.
You've told us there are two diffrent campus locally. Unfortunetly we have no clue where are we going to be stay.
One more thing, if you could let me know when will we pay dormitory fee, I would be greatly appreciate.
l look forward to hearing from you soon.
Thank you for reading ! Have a nice day :)
Dear, Mr. errol .
Hello Mr. errol ! Good evening.
I'm a Kang Won university student from korea who will be an exchange student at UiTM soon.
I'm really appreciate that you've greeted me.
For no other reason, I am writing to enquire about something that I wondering.
Here are the questions.
1. we have two options of flight we ride.
The first one is on the 5th September and the other one is on the 7th, September.
Both will be arrive at 3:05 at Kuala Lumpur airport.
I would be most grateful if you could recommend which will be better.
2. When could we get the list of courses.
I suppose it will be given on the orientation day , but if it's not, please let me know when it to be.
3. Last question is that when could we know a dormitory we will stay.
You've told us there are two diffrent campus locally. Unfortunetly we have no clue where are we going to be stay.
One more thing, if you could let me know when will we pay dormitory fee, I would be greatly appreciate.
l look forward to hearing from you soon.
Thank you for reading ! Have a nice day :)
CORRECTIONS:
Dear Mr. Errol,
Greetings!
I'm a Kang Won university student from Korea who will be an exchange student at UiTM soon.
I am writing to enquire about some information regarding the exchange program and I would want to ask you some questions.
1. We have two options for the flight.
The first one is on the 5th of September and the other one is on the 7th of September.
Both will be arriving at 3:05 at Kuala Lumpur airport.
I would be most grateful if you could recommend which flight will be better.
2. When could we get the list of courses?
I suppose it will be given on the orientation day, but if not, please let me know when can a I get a copy of this information.
3. Could you please tell me more about the accommodation?
You've told us there are two different campus locations. Unfortunately we have no clue where to stay that is convenient and how much will be the rent, if you could please let me know so that I could prepare for it.
I would gladly appreciate your immediate response to my queries.
I hope my message finds you well.
Respectfully,
Judy Kim
