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1. The feature of new generation is that they always try to adjust things to a standard.
2. After 3 hours, the bacteria will grow up exponentially in Kimbob we made
3. We could find the traces of the infinitesimal poison, and that was the main reason of the contamination of river.
4. The key of successful business is minimizing expenses and maximizing profits.
5. I draw the translation that is made from me parallel with the original.

1.I was in trouble when I didn’t adjust my watch.
2.When denominator is zero, it can exist as a number.
3.Unless you want to be a loser, you need to maximize your abilities.
4.Trapezium must be parallel one side from the other.
5.We are asked to be sequenced because it looks messy

1. My boss tends to be arbitrary from time to time.
2. It runs parallel to the river.
3. A large proportion of their deposit expires this fall.
4. The ball disappeared at the rate of knots.
5. He wrote a sequence of books about historical facts.

1. I’m adjusting new culture, life in New Zealand.
2. It was arbitrary to make a reservation in the fancy hotel.
3. They have designed the machine at an infinitesimal cost.
4. The rate for signing up in this site might be expensive.
5. The detective wrote a sequence of the event that one robbery killed someone

1. The feature of new generation is that they always try to adjust things to a standard.
2. After 3 hours, the bacteria will grow up exponentially in Kimbob we made.
3. We could find the traces of the infinitesimal poison, and that was the main reason of the contamination of river.
4. The key of successful business is minimizing expenses and maximizing profits.
5. I draw the translation that is made from me parallel with the original.

1.I was in trouble when I didn’t adjust my watch.
2.When the denominator is zero, It can exist as a number.
3.Unless you want to be a loser, you need to maximize your abilities.
4.Trapezium must be parallel one side from the other.
5.We are asked to be sequenced because It we looks messy.

1. My boss tends to be arbitrary from time to time.
2. It runs parallel to the river.
3. A large proportion of their deposit will expires this fall.
4. The ball disappeared at the rate of knots.
5. He wrote a sequence of a books about historical facts.

1. I’m adjusting in a new culture and life in New Zealand.
2. It was arbitrary to make a reservation in the fancy hotel.
3. They have designed the machine at an infinitesimal cost.
4. The rate for signing up in this site might be expensive.
5. The detective wrote a sequence of the event that one robbery killed someone.

 

Do your best as always Gina! Fighting! 

 


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