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I reminds I used to work as music therapist at hospital.
After I got a degree master , I've worked as music therapist..Music therapy mix music art and psychology counsel. I worked to diease or got a recovery kids, and hospice patients. To handicap improvement,relieve stress and emotional development , we use whloe tools about mucic and art. Music therapy is one parts of psychotherapy in hospital or care center. After having a baby ,Even though I quiet job I was happy as music therapist.

I reminds I used to work as music therapist at hospital.
After I got a degree master , I've worked as music therapist..Music therapy mix music art and psychology counsel. I worked to diease or got a recovery kids, and hospice patients. To handicap improvement,relieve stress and emotional development , we use whloe tools about mucic and art. Music therapy is one parts of psychotherapy in hospital or care center. After having a baby ,Even though I quiet job I was happy as music therapist.

Title: Old my Job

Title: [ My Old Job OR My Previous Job ]

I reminds I used to work as music therapist at hospital.

[ This reminds me about my previous job. I used to work as a music therapist in a hospital. ]

After I got a degree master , I've worked as music therapist.

[ After I got my master's degree, I've worked as a music therapist. ]

Music therapy mix music art and psychology counsel. I worked to diease or got a recovery kids, and hospice patients.

[ Music therapy mixes music, art and psychological counselling. I've worked with sick kids and other hospice patients and helped them recover. ]

To handicap improvement,relieve stress and emotional development , we use whloe tools about mucic and art.

[ For handicapped patients' improvement, to relieve stress and emotional development, we use whole tools about music and art. ]

Music therapy is one parts of psychotherapy in hospital or care center. After having a baby ,Even though I quiet job I was happy as music therapist.

[ Music therapy is one part of psychotherapy in hospitals or care centers. Eventhough I quit my job after having a baby, I was happy as a music therapist. ]


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