Today
we
enjoyed
my
first
Tanghulu
completely
couldn
'
t
meet
at
all
As
you
know
,
that
'
s
because
it
was
We
broke
our
promise
because
of
a
bad
rainy
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Tanghulu
2023.07.16
Today we enjoyed my first Tanghulu completely.Actually we couldn't meet at all.As you know, that's because it was rain.We broke our promise because of a bad rainy season.But!luckily,it was cool!So,I was very good.First we went to Tanghulu store that we decided yesterday.Iwanted to go 왕가 Tanghulu but ,the line was too long so ,unfortunately,we went to 톡톡 Tanghulu.I and mybest friend 영우 ate blueberry Tanghulu but best friend 고은 didn't eat it because of dite.It tasted like just blueberry .
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