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My favorite sport

2023.07.16

요청내용

I love soccer.
I like to play soccer with my friends.
playing soccer is good for my heaIth.
My favorite sport is soccer.

첨삭내용

I love soccer.
I like to play soccer with my friends.
Playing soccer is good for my heaIth.
My favorite sport is soccer.

Good job Ryan!
I hope that you'll keep on making essay. It will help you improve your writing skill and English skills.

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