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English Writing Practice (4)

1. In the modern society, There are diverse people who has different perspective and you need to adapt the new generation.
2.Human beings are evolved out of a monkey.
3. The new generation people have diverse feature.
4.The huge migration to one other country by most of the nation in 90's caused serious economic crisis.
5. This job require physical task

1.Most students tend to adapt a new class at the beginning of the class.
2.The best feature of human being evolved from chimps is that they can think.
3.Old generations may be required to retire so as to give some opportunities to younger generations.
4.If we want to have a perfect body shape, we need to work out something physical.
5.I survived after I plunged into the sea, somehow.

5. The advent of new generation means the change of culture, or the society will be left behind. (Does it makes sense?)
6. When Susan talks to her parents, troublesome feeling is inherent in her words and attention.
7. The migration to USA becomes harder because of the new president.
8. We should put a lot of effort to improve physical feature.
9. The cooking process of Japanese food is complicated and takes a long time.
10. If a student studies abroad, he or she has to survive in a new environment.

3. Many companies should evolve their own technology for surviving in the environment changed rapidly.
4. Samsung features 'fast following' technology.
6. Anger is inherent in all humans.
7. Birds of seasonal migration sometimes carries disease.
10 . I will survive in the cruel competition.

1. In the modern society, There are diverse people who has different perspective and you need to adapt the new generation.
2.Human beings are evolved out of a monkey.
3. The new generation people have diverse feature.
4.The huge migration to one other country by most of the nation in 90's caused serious economic crisis.
5. This job requires physical task.

1.Most students tend to adapt a new class at the beginning of their classes.
2.The best feature of human being evolved from chimps is that they can think.
3.Old generations may be required to retire so as to give some opportunities to younger generations.
4.If we want to have a perfect body shape, we need to work out something physically.
5.I survived after I plunged into the sea, somehow.

5. The advent of new generation means the change of culture, or the society will be left behind. (Does it makes sense?) It will change something but not utterly everything.
6. When Susan talks to her parents, troublesome feeling is inherent in her words and attention.
7. The migration to USA becomes harder because of the new president.
8. We should put a lot of efforts to improve our physical feature.
9. The cooking process of Japanese food is complicated and It takes a long time.
10. If a student studies abroad, he or she has to survive in a new environment.

3. Many companies should evolve their own technology for surviving in the environment changed rapidly.
4. Samsung features 'fast following' technology.
6. Anger is inherent in all humans.
7. Birds of seasonal migration sometimes carries disease.
10 . I will survive in the cruel competition.


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