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English Writing Practice (2)

1. I had to abandon my car to escape from the danger.
2. A serious drought last year adversely affected the crops.
3. The aggregate number of casualties for the last 20 years is 200,000.
4. It is relatively easy to cultivate when land is fertile.
5. We need to fertilize our mind with meditation, reading, and exercise.
6. The company intensified the influence in the US market.
7. I started doing nasal irrigation.
8. He obtained an important information for the consecutive murder incidents.
9. Photosynthesis is necessary for every plant on the planet.
10. The precipitation data this year are different from last year.
1. I prefer to anticipate and avoid problems before it happens.
2. The state of economy is catastrophic now but it will be back on its feet before long.
3. We collide almost all the time we talk about politics and end up hurting each other's feeling.
4. There are some places formed after an eruption in the past in Jeju island and could be volcanic activity again.
5. There are still a lot of countries suffering a severe famine.
6. The flood waters began to recede.
7. The incident seemed to make an impact on him a lot.
8. She persevered and finally achieved that goal.
9 . NZ currency has been plunged last few years.
10. It is forbidden to unleash the dog in this area.
1. Many areas in NZ are in earthquake-prone so those who live in NZ anticipate earthquakes.
2. The police said that the car accident was catastrophic and caused a few people died
3. Many scientists have collided with their own opinion about their experiments.

1. I had to abandon my car to escape from the danger.
2. A serious drought last year adversely affected the crops.
3. The aggregate number of casualties for the last 20 years is 200,000.
4. It is relatively easy to cultivate when land is fertile.
5. We need to fertilize our mind with meditation, reading, and exercise.
6. The company intensified the influence in the US market.
7. I started doing nasal irrigation.
8. He obtained an important information for the consecutive murder incidents.
9. Photosynthesis is necessary for every plant on the planet.
10. The precipitation data this year are different from last year.
1. I prefer to anticipate and avoid problems before it happens.
2. The state of economy is catastrophic now, but it will be back on its feet before long.
3. We collide almost all the time we talk about politics and end up hurting each other's feeling.
4. There are some places formed after an eruption in the past in Jeju island and could be volcanic activity again.
5. There are still a lot of countries suffering of a severe famine.
6. The flood waters began to recede.
7. The incident seemed to make an impact on him a lot.
8. She persevered and finally achieved that goal.
9 . NZ currency has been plunged last few years.
10. It is forbidden to unleash the dog in this area.
1. Many areas in NZ are in earthquake-prone so those who live in NZ anticipate earthquakes.
2. The police said that the car accident was catastrophic and caused a few people died
3. Many scientists have collided with their own opinion about their experiments.

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