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Hello, it's song yi.
The meantime I had holding a class because I got a job.
But next day, the company informed me that changed theirs mind.
So i give up looking for a job and i decide to register academy.
The academy is knowun for helpful get a job of airline industry.
And i started it today, it means i need to study English hard.
would you help me?
You alreday know me that I am not good at speaking English...

And please correct of myself-introduction.

Do you know the power of the smile?
smile often called the best medicine, can provide people with so many things.
Knowing such power of smile, i always smile.
Good morning, my name is song yi park.
first of all, i am very pleased to meet you.
thank you for inviting me today for an interview.
i graduated from Suwon science college majored in air travel and tourism.
and also i graduated from Han yang cyber university majored in business information.
from my major, i was able to get a general understanding and basic knowledge of customer service and its industry.
i worked at the Incheon airport, coex, korea securites depository and rockwell automation.
from my experience, i learned team work, cooperation and how to be punctual which are essential for this position.
if you give me a chance i'll do my best with my sincerity and kindess.
thank you for listening.


thank you very much.
see you today.

Hello, I am Song Yi.

The For the meantime I had holding a my classes because I got a job. But on the next day, the company informed me that they changed theirs mind.So I give up looking for a job and I decided to register in the academy.
The academy is known for helping students to get a job related to airline industry. And I started it today, It means I need to study English harder. Can you help me? You already know me that I am not good in speaking English...

And please correct of myself-introduction.
Do you know the power of the smilelaugher?  SmileLaughter often called the best medicine that can provide people with so many things.
Knowing such power of smilelaughter, I always laugh. Good morning, my name is Song Yi Park.
First of all, I am very pleased to meet you. Thank you for inviting me today for an interview.
I graduated from Suwon science college majored in air travel and tourism. and  I also graduated from Han yang cyber university majored in business information.
For rom my major, I was able to get a general understanding and basic knowledge of customer service and its industry.
I worked at the Incheon airport coex Korea securites depository and rockwell automation.
From my experience, I learned team work, cooperation and how to be punctual which are essential for this position.
If you will give me a chance to work in your company, I'll do my best with my sincerity and kindess. Thank you for listening.


Thank you very much.
see you today.


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