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The Story 04

He became rich. He distributed gold to the poor. The story the young brother to be rich spread in the village.
The old brother wanted to know how his younger brother became rich. The young brother told everythig to his old brother.
The old brothe said,"I really want to go to the treasure lsland." " Okay, But what shall I do?" said the young brother.
"Let's switch our houses." said the old brother immediately. The young brother agreed with his brother.
With watching the startree. the old brother looked forward to wait for a big bird.
A few days later the big bird came to eat fruits. The old brother pleaded to the bird with just pretending. "Because I owe you on eating fruits, I wil give a loaf of gold to you. Bring a bag to get gold." said the big bird.
The old brother is really glad to hear that. He let his wife prepare a big, big, huge bag.
On arriving there the old brother put gold his a big bag without a stop. He regretted not bringing a bigger bag than this.
"We must leave here before a sunset. I cannot fly across the sea in a dark." said the big bird. The old brother would like to stay longer to have gold more. 'I see. I will come here tomorrow again, I will take a bigger bag.' he thought.
The big bird had a trouble with gold weight and the bad weather. "I can't fly because of your bag. Throw away some."
He pretended not to listen what the bird said.
Eventually the tird bird dropped him at sea. The bird flew alone.
With gripping his bag with gold, the old brother died.

He became rich. He distributed the gold to the poor. The story of the young brother to be who became rich spread in the village.
The old brother wanted to know how his younger brother became rich. The younger brother told everything to his older brother.
The old brother said,"I really want to go to the treasure lsland." " Okay, But what shall I do?" said the younger brother.
"Let's switch our houses." said the older brother immediately. The younger brother agreed with his brother  upon looking at  With watching the star tree. The older brother looked forward to wait for a big bird.
A few days later the big bird came to eat fruits. The older brother pleaded to the bird with but he's was just pretending. "Because I owe you on eating fruits, I will give a loaf of gold to you. Bring a bag to get the gold." said the big bird.
The old brother is really glad to hear that. He let asked his wife to prepare a big, big, huge bag.
On arriving there the older brother put the a lot of  gold in this a his big bag continuously.without a stop. He regretted the that he didn't not bringing a bigger bag than this.
"We must leave here before a sunset. I cannot fly across the sea in the a dark." said the big bird. The older brother would like to stay longer to have more gold more. 'I see. I will come here tomorrow again, I will take a bigger bag.' he said. thought.
The big bird had a trouble with the gold weight and because of  the bad weather. "I can't fly because of your bag. Throw away some the big bird said but the older brother pretended that he didn't to listen what the bird was said. saying.
Eventually the big bird dropped him at the sea. The bird flew alone With gripping his bag with gold, the older brother died.


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