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A STARTREE STORY



Once upon a time there were two brothers. The younger brother is kind and diligent but the older brother is greedy and lazy.
The old brother always thought about how to engross an asset their parents had left. Finally he decided to let his young brother go out. The old brother said," You had better to move anothe place, because you already have got married." The young brother said," Ok, I will." The old brother sadi," I have to have this house for performing ancestral rites." The greedy old brother needed more. " For performing ancestral rites, I have to have this land to harvest rice" "For doing farming, I have to have cows." " I will give a thatched roof house with a startree instead of ancestral rites."
The young brother just followed that. He didn't complained about it. He took care of the startree everyday sincerely. He was poor but happy.
Amazingly the startree had a lot of fruits this year. He was delighted at selling the fruits. "I can make a money, buy enough rice."
By the way, a big bird ate his startree's fruits suddenly. "There is nothing to eat except this startree."said the young brother. "How come do you eat them?" "I should buy rice by selling them." He pleaded with crying. "Because I owe you on eating fruits, I wil give a loaf of gold to you. Bring a bag to get gold."
The big bird flew to a treasure Island with riding him on its back.
Before long, they arrived the treasure land. There are a lot of gold. He was pop-eyed with wonder. He put gold his bag as much as he can help the poor. He appreciated the big bird.

A STAR TREE STORY



Once upon a time there were two brothers. The younger brother is kind and diligent but the older brother is greedy and lazy.
The older brother always thought about how to engross an asset from their parents who past away. Finally he decided to let his younger brother to go out. The older brother said," It's better for you to move into another place, because you already got married." The younger brother said," Ok, I will." Then the  older brother said," I have need this  house for performing ancestral rites." The greedy older brother needed more. " For performing ancestral rites, He said I have need to have this our land to harvest rice" "for doing and for farming, I have need  to have also the cows." " I will give a thatched roof house with a star tree instead of ancestral rites."
The younger brother just followed that. He didn't complained about It. He took care of the star tree everyday sincerely. He was poor but his happy.
Amazingly the star tree had a lot of fruits this year. He was delighted at selling the fruits. "I can make a more money to buy enough rice."
But suddenly the way, a big bird ate his star tree's fruits. suddenly. "There is nothing to eat except this star tree."said the younger brother said. "How come do you eat them?" "I should buy rice by selling them." He pleaded with while crying. "Because I owe you on eating fruits, I will give you a loaf of gold. to you. Bring a bag to get the gold."
The big bird flew to a treasure island with riding him on its back.
Before long, they arrived the treasure land. There are a lot of gold. He was pop-eyed with wonder. He put a lot of gold in his bag as much as he can to help the poor. He appreciated the big bird's help.


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