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Swimming pool

2023.06.09

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I went swimming pool last time.(Because it was her birthday)
We swam and rode the slide.
And it was so fun!

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I went swimming pool last time.(Because it was her birthday)
We swam and rode the slide.
And it was so fun!

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I went to swimming pool last time, because it was my friend's birthday.
We swam and rode the slides.
It was so fun!

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