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3-3.I worked in Chamber of Commerce and Secretary Member team, basically I was that to organize and classify the files that are relevant to operations, those members that are managed by secondary Chamber of Commerce and Industry over the telephone member information or notification events related to Chamber of Commerce has been working to make sure that correct.

3-4. In The IM Company, I was a marketing-related work. And planning the marketing that matches the characteristics of the companies of Hayem Company, for example, actually to prepare a scheme that is able to run this project, I was responsible for the offline and online marketing of business.

3-5.I was a business to check whether the total amount of money together the work and tax invoice to organize and classify the different receipts year to Excel file is suitable, also of receipt accounting of such classification work by industry to make sure the business's number, it was responsible for assisting the tax-related work.

1-1.Since not what you majored in my art, I do not actually know much about art. However, I learned Business Administration majoring knowledge so far has been the support to learn if it can be applied as actually what the company called canvas-to-Art. In addition, it is now doing so support and I wanted to see how exhibition to be held in the showroom of canvas-to-Art is how they are operated directly.

3-3.I worked in Chamber of Commerce and Secretary Member team, basically I was that to organize and classify the files that are relevant to operations, those members that are managed by secondary Chamber of Commerce and Industry over the telephone member information or notification events related to Chamber of Commerce has been working to make sure that correct.

3-4. In The IM Company, I was a marketing-related work. And planning the marketing that matches the characteristics of the companies of Hayem Company, for example, actually to prepare a scheme that is able to run this project, I was responsible for the offline and online marketing of business.

3-5.I was a business to check whether the total amount of money together the work and tax invoice to organize and classify the different receipts year to Excel file is suitable, also of receipt accounting of such classification work by industry to make sure the business's number, it was responsible for assisting the tax-related work.

1-1.Since not what you majored in my art, I do not actually know much about art. However, I learned Business Administration majoring knowledge so far has been the support to learn if it can be applied as actually what the company called canvas-to-Art. In addition, it is now doing so support and I wanted to see how exhibition to be held in the showroom of canvas-to-Art is how they are operated directly.

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3-3.I worked in Chamber of Commerce and Secretary Member team, basically I was trained organize and classify the files that are relevant to operations, those members that are managed by secondary Chamber of Commerce and Industry over the telephone member information or notification events related to Chamber of Commerce has been working to make sure that correct.

3-4. In The IM Company, I was in a marketing-related work. And plan the marketing that matches the characteristics of the companies of Hayem Company, for example, actually  I prepared a scheme that is able to run this project, I was responsible for the offline and online marketing of business.

3-5.In business  you need to check whether the total amount of money together with the work and tax invoice to organize and classify the different receipts year to Excel file is suitable, also the receipt of accounting such classification work by industry to make sure the business's number, it was responsible for assisting the tax-related work.

1-1.Since I am not  an art major, I do not actually know much about arts. However, I am  Business Administration major is the  knowledge that I have so far has been the support to learn if it can be applied into what the company called canvas-to-Art. In addition, it is now doing some support and I wanted to see how exhibition to be held in the showroom of canvas-to-Art on how they were operated directly.

 


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