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Island trip

Today was Sunday. The weather was nice to go somewhere. I got up late a litter. We had nothing special to do today. So I suggested to go to a Island. My kids wanted to go there. It took one hour to a wharf where docks a ferry by car and 10 minutes to get in an island by ferry boat.
Many people were there. Some were families, the others were friends. We got off the ferry. It was a beautiful island. There were many kinds of flowers and plants. We were impressed by some statues which designed cartoon characters-Super Man,The Simpsons, Hello Kitty and so on.
We were surviced 2 hours to look around the Island. It was a litter bit hard time. But we had a great time.
We shared another good memory

Today was Sunday. The weather was nice to go somewhere. I got up late a litter. We had nothing special to do today. So I suggested to go to a Island. My kids wanted to go there. It took one hour to a wharf where docks a ferry by car and 10 minutes to get in an island by ferry boat.
Many people were there. Some were families, the others were friends. We got off the ferry. It was a beautiful island. There were many kinds of flowers and plants. We were impressed by some statues which designed cartoon characters-Super Man,The Simpsons, Hello Kitty and so on.
We were surviced 2 hours to look around the Island. It was a litter bit hard time. But we had a great time.
We shared another good memory

Correction: 

Today was Sunday The weather was nice to go to somewhere. I got up late a little bit. We had nothing special to do today, so I suggested to go to an Island and my kids wanted to go there too. It took about one hour to wharf where docks a ferry by a car and 10 minutes to get in an island by a ferry boat. Many people were there. Some was families and the others were friends. We got off the ferry and we saw the island It was beautiful. There were many kinds of flowers and plants. We're impressed by some statues which is designed as cartoon characters such as super man, the simpsons, hello kitty and so on. We stayed in the island for 2 hours to look around. It was a little bit hard time for us, but we had a great time. We shared another good memory.


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