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Ian became kind

Once upon a time, there was a boy named Ian. His personality was really really bad. So everyone didn't like him. So Ian was sad. While he was going home, he saw new store, the store's name was 'come and see'. Ian thought it was interesting so he went inside the store. Inside there was a old man. He was making some machine. Ian asked the old man, what he was doing and the old man said he was making time machine. Ian asked the old man he could try the time machine, and the old man said okay, so I

Once upon a time, there was a boy named Ian. His personality was really really bad. So everyone didn't like him. So Ian was sad. While he was going home, he saw new store, the store's name was 'come and see'. Ian thought it was interesting so he went inside the store. Inside there was a old man. He was making some machine. Ian asked the old man, what he was doing and the old man said he was making time machine. Ian asked the old man he could try the time machine, and the old man said okay, so I

 

Once upon a time, there was a boy named Ian. His personality was really really bad. So everyone didn't like him. So Ian was sad. While he was going home, he saw new a store, the store's name was 'come and see'. Ian thought it was interesting so he went inside the store. Inside there was a old man. He was making some machine. Ian asked the old man, what he was doing and the old man said he was making time machine. Ian asked the old man he could try the time machine, and the old man said okay, so I

 


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