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We’re going to check the next performance right now. The following performance is called ( ). Watch it right now.
From this performance, we’re likely to be nervous. That’s because the former shows were too much excellent, however, you should not feel nervous regardless of the preceding shows. Please do your best on this stage. Go on~~~
Dear 00, you’re so nice and wonderful!! And then, as we cheer them up who are waiting behind the stage, we’ll start it again with all our energy. 00: Let’s watch the following show all together right now. Please give a big hand to them.
00: It remains only two performances from now! Aren’t you sad to think about stopping the show soon here?
00: Does 00 also has the same feeling with me? I’m really sad to think about ending the show. However, we should watch a performance excitedly till the end.00: (  ) begins at this moment00: Dear 00, it’s the last time of our schedule. How could I deal with my sense of miss?00: That’s all right!! Though the performance is turn to the last time, but we are getting a big hand from the guests 00: Sure, Let’s watch the last performance with giving a big hand. 00: I am really loving this place with all together.00: I’m also like this good chance to communicate with many people and I wish I had the same place again in the near offuture.

We’re going to check the next performance right now. The following performance is called ( ). Watch it right now.
From this performance, we’re likely to be nervous. That’s because the former shows were too much excellent, however, you should not feel nervous regardless of the preceding shows. Please do your best on this stage. Go on~~~
Dear 00, you’re so nice and wonderful!! And then, as we cheer them up who are waiting behind the stage, we’ll start it again with all our energy. 00: Let’s watch the following show all together right now. Please give a big hand to them.
00: It remains only two performances from now! Aren’t you sad to think about stopping the show soon here?
00: Does 00 also has the same feeling with me? I’m really sad to think about ending the show. However, we should watch a performance excitedly till the end.00: (  ) begins at this moment00: Dear 00, it’s the last time of our schedule. How could I deal with my sense of miss?00: That’s all right!! Though the performance is turn to the last time, but we are getting a big hand from the guests 00: Sure, Let’s watch the last performance with giving a big hand. 00: I am really loving this place with all together.00: I’m also like this good chance to communicate with many people and I wish I had the same place again in the near offuture.

* hi Mark, I rephrased some of the statements and knowing your approach on this,I am certain you will do just beautifully *

CORRECTIONS: The next group will be performing (presentation). 

From this performance, we’re likely to be nervous because the former shows excellence, however, you should not feel nervous regardless of the preceding shows of entertainment presented. Please do your best on this stage next group. Ladies and gentlemen ~~~
my beloved group 00, you’re so nice and wonderful, a job well done for an impressive performance!! And then, as we cheer them up, waiting behind the stage, we’ll start it again with all our energy. 00: Let’s watch the following show all together right now. Please give them a big round of applause. 
00: There remain only two performances from now! Don’t you feel sad that we are now in the final portion of the program? 
00: Do 00 also have the same feeling as I do? It’s really sad to think about ending the show. However, we should watch another performance with zest.00: (  ) begins at this moment00: Dear 00, it’s the last part of our program?00: That’s all right!! Though the performance is turn to the last time, but we are getting a big hand from the guests 00: Sure, Let’s watch the last performance with a big hand. 00: I really love this place with all of our guests and students who participated. A big round of applause ladies and gentlemen we have just concluded the program 00: I would also like to take the chance of communicating with many people and I wish I will have the chance to see you again in the near future. Thank you and a great day cheers to each and everyone.


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