영작교정
목록
완료

Script

We’re going to check the next performance right now. The following performance is called ( ). Watch it right now.
From this performance, we’re likely to be nervous. That’s because the former shows were too much excellent, however, you should not feel nervous regardless of the preceding shows. Please do your best on this stage. Go on~~~
Dear 00, you’re so nice and wonderful!! And then, as we cheer them up who are waiting behind the stage, we’ll start it again with all our energy. 00: Let’s watch the following show all together right now. Please give a big hand to them.
00: It remains only two performances from now! Aren’t you sad to think about stopping the show soon here?
00: Does 00 also has the same feeling with me? I’m really sad to think about ending the show. However, we should watch a performance excitedly till the end.00: (  ) begins at this moment00: Dear 00, it’s the last time of our schedule. How could I deal with my sense of miss?00: That’s all right!! Though the performance is turn to the last time, but we are getting a big hand from the guests 00: Sure, Let’s watch the last performance with giving a big hand. 00: I am really loving this place with all together.00: I’m also like this good chance to communicate with many people and I wish I had the same place again in the near offuture.

We’re going to check the next performance right now. The following performance is called ( ). Watch it right now.
From this performance, we’re likely to be nervous. That’s because the former shows were too much excellent, however, you should not feel nervous regardless of the preceding shows. Please do your best on this stage. Go on~~~
Dear 00, you’re so nice and wonderful!! And then, as we cheer them up who are waiting behind the stage, we’ll start it again with all our energy. 00: Let’s watch the following show all together right now. Please give a big hand to them.
00: It remains only two performances from now! Aren’t you sad to think about stopping the show soon here?
00: Does 00 also has the same feeling with me? I’m really sad to think about ending the show. However, we should watch a performance excitedly till the end.00: (  ) begins at this moment00: Dear 00, it’s the last time of our schedule. How could I deal with my sense of miss?00: That’s all right!! Though the performance is turn to the last time, but we are getting a big hand from the guests 00: Sure, Let’s watch the last performance with giving a big hand. 00: I am really loving this place with all together.00: I’m also like this good chance to communicate with many people and I wish I had the same place again in the near offuture.

* hi Mark, I rephrased some of the statements and knowing your approach on this,I am certain you will do just beautifully *

CORRECTIONS: The next group will be performing (presentation). 

From this performance, we’re likely to be nervous because the former shows excellence, however, you should not feel nervous regardless of the preceding shows of entertainment presented. Please do your best on this stage next group. Ladies and gentlemen ~~~
my beloved group 00, you’re so nice and wonderful, a job well done for an impressive performance!! And then, as we cheer them up, waiting behind the stage, we’ll start it again with all our energy. 00: Let’s watch the following show all together right now. Please give them a big round of applause. 
00: There remain only two performances from now! Don’t you feel sad that we are now in the final portion of the program? 
00: Do 00 also have the same feeling as I do? It’s really sad to think about ending the show. However, we should watch another performance with zest.00: (  ) begins at this moment00: Dear 00, it’s the last part of our program?00: That’s all right!! Though the performance is turn to the last time, but we are getting a big hand from the guests 00: Sure, Let’s watch the last performance with a big hand. 00: I really love this place with all of our guests and students who participated. A big round of applause ladies and gentlemen we have just concluded the program 00: I would also like to take the chance of communicating with many people and I wish I will have the chance to see you again in the near future. Thank you and a great day cheers to each and everyone.


수강정보
필리핀 전화영어 주 2회 10분 12주
튜터
Maribel
교재
Open to Debate 1
[시니어] 프리토킹
번호
제목
작성자
튜터
작성일
6756
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭] this is my first perm ever....
Bella
Vivien
2025.01.07
6755
완료
[15번째 영작 첨삭] My name
LEE SEOI
Love Joy
2025.01.07
6754
완료
[7번째 영작 첨삭] The reason Isabella doesn't have energy these days
Isabella
K
2025.01.07
6753
완료
[60번째 영작 첨삭] winter vacation
David
Rainbow
2025.01.07
6752
완료
[207번째 영작 첨삭] Fishing
Oliver
Frans
2025.01.07
6751
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭] My friend's birthday gift
RUI
Yana
2025.01.07
6750
완료
[5번째 영작 첨삭] friend
김정화
Myryl
2025.01.07
6749
완료
[4번째 영작 첨삭] today
김정화
Myryl
2025.01.07
6748
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭] My first day in winter vacation
jung won Jo
Sera
2025.01.07
6747
완료
[163번째 영작 첨삭] Love
Rachel
Bel
2025.01.06
6746
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭] Bookstore
최서윤
Bel
2025.01.06
6745
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭] Hello, teacher
Lucia
Heanna
2025.01.05
6744
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭] snowsled
kang hee
Charm
2025.01.05
6743
완료
[47번째 영작 첨삭] Unification.
JiHu
Gresha
2025.01.05
6742
완료
[46번째 영작 첨삭] New semester.
JiHu
Gresha
2025.01.05
6741
완료
[45번째 영작 첨삭] I like playing board game.
JiHu
Gresha
2025.01.05
6740
완료
[44번째 영작 첨삭] My new year's plans.
JiHu
Gresha
2025.01.05
6739
완료
[43번째 영작 첨삭] Taekwondo.
JiHu
Gresha
2025.01.05
6738
완료
[42번째 영작 첨삭] My Christmas presents.
JiHu
Gresha
2025.01.05
6737
완료
[54번째 영작 첨삭] diary
Yoon
Anna
2025.01.05

초대한 친구가 수업을 등록하면
무료 수업 1회를 드려요!

무료 수업 1회
초대한 친구가 회원 가입 및 수강권 결제 후 수업을 등록하면
두 사람 모두 무료 수업 1회 수강권을 받아요!
Step 01. 조이영어로 친구를 초대해 보세요!
https://joy05.co.kr
Step 02. 인증하기
초대한 친구가 수업 등록을 완료하면, 고객센터로 수업을 등록한 친구의 '아이디' 또는 '이름 + 휴대폰 번호 뒷자리'를 남겨주세요!
*자녀 혹은 학부모 이름으로 가입하신 경우, 실제 회원가입하신 수강생 이름으로 적어주세요!
Ex. 친구 아이디: joy5205 / 친구 이름: 김조이, 9876
Step 03. 혜택받기
고객센터를 통해 인증하신 내용이 확인되면, 혜택을 적용해드립니다!

Zoom 화상수업 가이드

1. Zoom 설치하기
아래 링크에 접속하여 Zoom 프로그램을 설치합니다.
2. 수강실 입장하기
1) 조이영어 홈페이지 로그인 후 강의실에서 [수강실 입장] 버튼을 클릭해주세요.
2) 버튼을 누르고 Zoom 프로그램 열기 허용 → 컴퓨터 오디오로 참가를 누르면 튜터와 연결됩니다.
3. Zoom 이용에 다른 문의사항이 있으신가요?
조이영어 학습매니저에게 연락주시면 수업에 관련된 문의사항을 친절히 상담해드리겠습니다.
  • 카카오톡 상담 채널 : @조이영어
  • 조이영어 고객센터 : 1899-8695 (운영시간 : 월~금 9:00~17:30)

이용약관

개인정보취급방침