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Yesterday When I went out, I forgot bring my phone.
So i can't answer the phone. sorry.

Yesterday was korea new president election day.
So I also voted in the morning, and met my friends.

Whe i was in university, I can met my friends often. But nowdays my friends have to go company, So we can only met in holiday.
so sad.

We went to gunguk university, There are a lot of chinese food restaurants.
Our major is chinese, So We experienced china, Beside we really love chinese food.
So yesterday We also ate chinese food.

After having a good time with my friends, I arrived at home and watched news with my mom.
In news, they broadcast about new president.

I heard Koreans voter turn out about 78percent.
Additionally 20's voter turnout is really increased.
It is good situation.

Our new president is moon jae in.
I hope he will make a good korea to live with my family.
I also support him, and believe him

Yesterday When I went out, I forgot  to bring my phone.
So I can't answer the phone. sorry.

Correction:

Yesterday was Korean new presidential election day.
So I also voted in the morning, and met my friends.

When  I was in university, I can meet my friends to often. But nowdays my friends have to go to their company, So we can only meet in holiday.
so sad.

We went to gunguk university, There are a lot of chinese food in the restaurants.
Our major is chinese, so we experienced china, Beside we really love chinese food.
So yesterday we also ate chinese food.

After having a good time with my friends, I arrived at home and watched news with my mom.
In the news, they broadcast about our new president.

I heard that Koreans voter turn out about 78 percent.
Additionally 20 percent of  voters turn out is really an increased.
It's a good result..

Our new president is Moon Jae In.
I hope he will make a good change in our country Korea for us to  live peacefully with my family.
I also support him, and I believe in him.


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