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Starting at may third. There is a long holiday in Korea. May 5th is children's day and May 3th is Budda's Birthday.

On the weekend, I met my friends. On Friday I went to Hongdae, On weekend, I went to Gangnam.
So my parents disappointed me. Because they want that I stay at home spend time with my parents.
Beside my brother has a break from military.
So this weekend such a long time no see my family together(teache i don't know this sentence how to write correctly)

But I already had promise, and I don't want break my promise.
In Gangnam I met friend at the night, and drank alchol.
Before 5years about 20years old, I can play overnight, not too tired.
But thesedays I can't play overnight. so hard.
So we played at night 2:00am came back home. But still this is a good time with my high school friend.

New week also started, and I went to toeic speaking academy first time.
It it still hard to me, But I efforted and want to get high score. My test will May 20th.
So I must practice hard

Starting on  May third. There is a long holiday in Korea. May 5th is children's day and May 3th is Budda's Birthday.

On the weekends I met my friends. On Friday I went to Hongdae and  to Gangnam.
That's why my parents are very disappointed  to  me, because they want me  to just stay at home and spend my time with them.

Besides my brother has a short break from the military.
So this weekend is like a reunion get together party for all of us.
I already had a promise, and I don't want break what I  promise to them.
In Gangnam I met my friends at  night, and drank alcohol.
Before  I can stay up overnight and It's not too tiring.
But thesedays I can't stay up overnight. because It's so hard.
So we party all night and came back home at around 2:00am in the morning. It was great spending my time with my high school friend.

New week also just started, and I went to TOIEC speaking academy for the first time.
It was hard to me, but I exerted much of my effort to get a high score. My test will be on May 20th, so I must practice harder.


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