On Children's Day, We went to the campling ground. I'm with my father, mother, grandmother and aunt. My aunt gave 100,000 won, Calimba and Calimba music sheets. My grandmother gave many oriental medicines. They are NOT bitter. I love them, They are delicious. I played ''clever boy'' game on arcade console. I think I played that game so many times!. It`s so interesting. At night, we made fire and we watched it. I felt so good this Children`s Day.
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Children's day
2023.05.09
On Children's day, We went to the campling ground. There are my father, mother, grandmother, me and aunt. My aunt gave 100,000won and Kalimba and Kalimba sheet music and my grandmother gave many oriental medicines. It is NOT bitter. I love them, They are delicious. I play 'clever boy' game on arcade console. I think i played that game so many!. It`s interesting and at night, we make fire and we natch that fire. So good this children`s day.
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