On Children's Day, We went to the campling ground. I'm with my father, mother, grandmother and aunt. My aunt gave 100,000 won, Calimba and Calimba music sheets. My grandmother gave many oriental medicines. They are NOT bitter. I love them, They are delicious. I played ''clever boy'' game on arcade console. I think I played that game so many times!. It`s so interesting. At night, we made fire and we watched it. I felt so good this Children`s Day.
영작교정
완료
Children's day
2023.05.09
On Children's day, We went to the campling ground. There are my father, mother, grandmother, me and aunt. My aunt gave 100,000won and Kalimba and Kalimba sheet music and my grandmother gave many oriental medicines. It is NOT bitter. I love them, They are delicious. I play 'clever boy' game on arcade console. I think i played that game so many!. It`s interesting and at night, we make fire and we natch that fire. So good this children`s day.
튜터
Camille
번호
제목
튜터
작성일
1019
완료
[2번째 영작 첨삭]
My bother
-
2020.06.04
1018
완료
[9번째 영작 첨삭]
Fallback
-
2020.06.04
1017
접수
[7번째 영작 첨삭]
happy
-
2020.06.03
1016
완료
[6번째 영작 첨삭]
think broken
-
2020.06.03
1015
완료
[10번째 영작 첨삭]
Spring
-
2020.06.03
1014
완료
[12번째 영작 첨삭]
Winter
-
2020.06.03
1013
완료
[11번째 영작 첨삭]
Autumn
-
2020.06.03
1012
완료
[10번째 영작 첨삭]
Summer
-
2020.06.03
1011
완료
[9번째 영작 첨삭]
Spring
-
2020.06.03
1010
완료
[8번째 영작 첨삭]
Brothers and Sisters
-
2020.06.03
1009
완료
[7번째 영작 첨삭]
My favorite things
-
2020.06.03
1008
완료
[14번째 영작 첨삭]
winter
-
2020.06.03
1007
완료
[13번째 영작 첨삭]
fall
-
2020.06.03
1006
완료
[12번째 영작 첨삭]
summer
-
2020.06.03
1005
완료
[11번째 영작 첨삭]
spring
-
2020.06.03
1004
완료
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
HOWEVER BUT
-
2020.06.02
1003
접수
[1번째 영작 첨삭]
lean English
-
2020.06.02
1002
완료
[18번째 영작 첨삭]
Correction request
-
2020.06.02
1001
완료
[12번째 영작 첨삭]
my diary.
-
2020.06.01
1000
완료
[11번째 영작 첨삭]
my diary
-
2020.05.31