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Once upon a time there was a girl who was very Silly. His name was Hulley. Ian was so silly that everyone doesn't like him. So Ian was lonely. One day, at Ian's classroom, very pretty and smart girl named Linhu. Linhu was soon became the most popular girl in Hulley's school. Hulley wants to be like her, so she asked how to be smart, but Linhu said bad words to Hulley and tell Hulley that his brain was bad. Acctually Linhu was really bad girl. She was hiding the fact. So Hulley studied by herself

Once upon a time there was a girl who was very Silly. His name was Hulley. Ian was so silly that everyone doesn't like him. So Ian was lonely. One day, at Ian's classroom, very pretty and smart girl named Linhu. Linhu was soon became the most popular girl in Hulley's school. Hulley wants to be like her, so she asked how to be smart, but Linhu said bad words to Hulley and tell Hulley that his brain was bad. Acctually Linhu was really bad girl. She was hiding the fact. So Hulley studied by herself

 

Once upon a time there was a girl who was very silly. His name was Hulley. Ian was so silly that everyone doesn't like him. So Ian was lonely. One day, at Ian's classroom, There was a very pretty and smart girl named Linhu. Linhu was soon became the most popular girl in Hulley's school. Hulley wants to be like her, so she asked how to be smart, but Linhu said bad words to Hulley and tell Hulley that his brain was bad. Actually Linhu was really a bad girl. She was hiding the fact. So Hulley studied by herself

 


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